From 04c78f466e1ba48fd3153197928d7a72704e4258 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tmont Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2023 12:44:56 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] waiting for the stars tweaks --- album3/waiting-for-stars.ly | 23 +++++++++++------------ album3/waiting-for-stars.pdf | Bin 1813278 -> 1809647 bytes 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/album3/waiting-for-stars.ly b/album3/waiting-for-stars.ly index 00562f0..b85a8cf 100644 --- a/album3/waiting-for-stars.ly +++ b/album3/waiting-for-stars.ly @@ -150,8 +150,8 @@ guitarOne = \relative c { a2 a8 b cs4 ~ | cs1 | a4 e cs'8 d e4 ~ | e1 | - r2 d8 e f4 ~ | f2 e4 f | - g2 f | e g | + d4 a d8 e f4 ~ | f2 e4 f | + g2 f | e \grace fs8( g2) | % pre-chorus 2 fs1 | R1*7 | @@ -336,11 +336,10 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c { { | } } - % pre-chorus - \repeat unfold 3 { - 8 e e e e e | - e e e e( fs) \glissando( ) | - } + % pre-chorus 2 + fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~ | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( fs) | + fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~ | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( fs) | + fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~ | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( e) | 4. 8 ~ q4 ~ | q2 ~ q8 4. | \time 12/8 @@ -620,8 +619,8 @@ vocalMelody = \relative c' { e4 e d8 e4 f8( ~ | f4 e) r4 a, | b2 b4. b8 ~ | b2 r4 b | - cs cs cs cs8 cs( ~ | cs) cs4. r4 cs | - d d d d8 d( ~ | d) d4. r4 d | + cs cs cs cs8 cs ~ | cs cs4. r4 cs | + d d d d8 d ~ | d d4. r4 d | e4 e4 e8 e4. | f2( g | \bar "||" @@ -677,7 +676,7 @@ allTheLyrics = \lyricmode { % verse 3 The right -- eous words seem so in -- con -- se -- quen -- tial The al -- tru -- i -- stic press -- ure dis -- torts re -- al -- i -- ty. __ - The shak -- ing hands, __ with fear -- ful trep -- i -- da -- tion, + The shak -- ing hands, __ with fright -- ened hes -- i -- ta -- tion, rise up with in -- de -- pen -- dence and leave the host in -- side. __ % bridge @@ -790,8 +789,8 @@ chordValues = \chordmode { b1:m | q | g:1.3.5.7+.11+ | q | e:m13 | q | a:1.2.4.5 | d2:1.3-.5.9 g2:m6/bf | % bridge - a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m | e:/gs | - a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m | e:1.3-.5-| + a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m7 | e:/gs | + a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m7 | e:1.3-.5-| % pre-chorus 2 fs1*6:5 | fs4.:5 g:5 a4:sus2 | q2 q8 fs4.:/as | diff --git a/album3/waiting-for-stars.pdf b/album3/waiting-for-stars.pdf index b8c87c840ab8a6b86ba6ddc71c669aeffbc3cbcf..52fc4220617e1ce3d219142088b40cdcd9343a66 100644 GIT binary patch delta 396469 zcmXtfV|XS_6K?EeW81d1v2EM7lP9)qXJgyO#x^##?UVO>=lt!fYkH=8x~{rWxyyFf z?RNf6z!BnrGFKJi{N8vDRp{~J>xqOR2{0(VV$ar5E{jZ?giNaluXV<6zYCU~Nj_qd z&IaU@Jp7#%x?OBQ>`sENGDKXt-_R{MfUcRuj>#tY9seP~a+k2^xW51{Go4wG-J;h~A zFBl+lZdkgdl%a@BIZCc{rS$vJL^%?p6kNqVBR?=l;D*w#)UYG!SE+?g;m&&z3F1Ch zvAdqYTM-Zw`%6?rVbONOih9@?o%fDv$9Y^~=N;Om`$soN>YXDgNW#}C%SQeRz!(u@@$e~5;2y{ggV{#EYjiP5IgCiEt z<)Jh)vT7K1nGCUt7Q%!{k}0gPCvm*;mZ4~VPX8fz9LyQ|2}UI=44CXl5F9&olSOP{g|>`aL43&{f;{Kco?|Mo z;Vbdj5>o+BH4M3p*jA~%(WOw<>d5j$0Db`oIbEm;1B0vrGh8SXOEv7QjXSyTuv`}4 z9YHf20e@fr6Q=$XM(f+023wtzVXli~d_-4KJ)Tx4Q>J#B_~+Lmm(ImUKuQA?p=cJv zq`=>G>CBPjm_J#@AdxO%9whJ5tUx8^Dk6M|Eumv+1wlE!*{Afi+P0LX^}tBrQF