tweaks

all-around-the-galaxy.ly

@@ -45,8 +45,9 @@ lead = \new Staff \with {
     ds4. fs,8 ~ fs4 ds'8 e | fs4. a,8 ~ a4 a'8 gs |
     fs4. e8 ~ e4 ds | e1 |
     
-    \repeat unfold 31 r1
-    r2 r4 b16 ds e fs |
+    \repeat unfold 24 r1
+    ef2\pp g | f a | g b | c1 |
+    d2 b | cs e | fs b, | fs2. b,16\f ds e fs |
     \repeat unfold 2 {
       <b, e gs>8 r q q r <b ds fs> r <b e gs> |
       r <b fs' a> r <b e gs> r <b ds fs>4 \times 2/3 { b16 cs e } |
@@ -260,7 +261,7 @@ percussion = \new DrumStaff \with {
   
   \repeat unfold 4 {
     <sn cymc>8 r r <sn cymc> r4 <sn cymc>8 r |
-    bd4 hho hho hho |
+    bd4 \repeat unfold 3 { hho16 hh hh hh } |
   }
   
   
@@ -285,8 +286,8 @@ pad = \new Staff \with {
   }
 }
 
-squareHarmony = \new Staff \with {
-  instrumentName = "Sawtooth"
+saw = \new Staff \with {
+  instrumentName = "Saw"
   midiInstrument = #"lead 2 (sawtooth)"
   midiMaximumVolume = #0.6
 } {
@@ -329,8 +330,13 @@ squareHarmony = \new Staff \with {
       e8 r e e r b r
     }
     \alternative {
-      { a8 ~ | a8 e'16\f a b cs b a e fs e cs a4 | }
-      { d8 ~ | d8 a'16\f d e fs e d a d e fs g fs e d | }
+      { a8 ~ | a8 e'16\ff a b cs b a e fs e cs a cs e fs | }
+      { d8 ~ | d8 a'16\ff d e fs e d a d e fs g fs e d | }
+    }
+    
+    e4\mf fs, g a | b a g fs |
+    \repeat unfold 3 {
+      e4 fs g a | b a g fs |
     }
   }
 }
@@ -399,9 +405,9 @@ sweep = \new Staff \with {
 \score {
   <<
     \lead
-    \squareHarmony
     \recorder
     \flute
+    \saw
     \pad
     \padAlt
     \sweep