finished lyrics and song structure for awake

awake.ly

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 \version "2.18.2"
 \language "english"
-\include "lib/guitar-bend.ily"
 
 \header {
   title = "Awake"
@@ -36,19 +35,17 @@ firstInterlude = \relative c {
 }
 
 firstVerseRiff = \relative c {
-  \repeat unfold 4 {
+  \repeat unfold 2 {
     \repeat unfold 2 { b8 fs' b <b e> ~ q b, <b' b>4 | }
     \repeat unfold 2 { a,8 fs' b <cs e> ~ q a, <b' b>4 | }
   }
 }
 
 bsusSingleNoteRiff = \relative c {
-  \repeat unfold 2 {
+  b8 e fs b, e b' b, e | fs b, e b' b, e fs e |
-    b8 e fs b, e b' b, e | fs b, e b' b, e fs e |
+  a, e' fs a, e' b' a, e' | fs a, e' b' a, e' fs16( g fs8) |
-    a, e' fs a, e' b' a, e' | fs a, e' b' a, e' fs16( g fs8) |
+  b, e fs b, e b' b, e | fs b, e b' b, e fs e |
-    b, e fs b, e b' b, e | fs b, e b' b, e fs e |
+  a, e' fs a, e' b' a, e' | fs a, e' b' a,16 b ds e ds4 |
-    a, e' fs a, e' b' a, e' | fs a, e' b' a,16 b ds e ds4 |
-  }
 }
 
 introRhythmGOne = \relative c {
@@ -95,7 +92,7 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c {
   \repeat unfold 2 \mainFifthRiff
   \introRhythmGTwo
 
-  \bsusSingleNoteRiff
+  \repeat unfold 2 \bsusSingleNoteRiff
 
   <e, b' e>1 | <fs d'> | <b fs' b> | <c e a> |
 
@@ -107,7 +104,7 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c {
   \repeat unfold 8 r1
 
   % verse 2
-  \bsusSingleNoteRiff
+  \repeat unfold 2 \bsusSingleNoteRiff
 
   % interlude 2
   \repeat unfold 2 {
@@ -116,7 +113,7 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c {
   }
 
   % f#m interlude
-  fs8^"Interlude 3" cs' fs gs a gs a fs |
+  fs8^"Pre-chorus" cs' fs gs a gs a fs |
   fs, cs' fs gs a gs a fs |
   \repeat unfold 2 { gs, ds' gs as cs as bs gs | }
   \repeat unfold 2 { fs,8 cs' fs gs a gs a fs | }
@@ -244,8 +241,15 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c {
   \chorusRhythm
 
   % outro
-  \bsusSingleNoteRiff
+  \repeat unfold 2 \mainFifthRiff
+  \introRhythmGOne
+  \repeat unfold 2 \mainFifthRiff
+  \introRhythmGTwo
 
+  \repeat unfold 2 \bsusSingleNoteRiff
+
+  \firstVerseRiff
+  \bsusSingleNoteRiff
   \firstInterlude \bar "|."
 }
 
@@ -308,9 +312,9 @@ guitarOne = \relative c'' {
   >>
 
   \firstInterlude \bar "||"
-  \firstVerseRiff
+  \repeat unfold 2 \firstVerseRiff
   \firstInterlude
-  \firstVerseRiff
+  \repeat unfold 2 \firstVerseRiff
 
   % interlude 2
   \repeat unfold 4 r1
@@ -325,10 +329,6 @@ guitarOne = \relative c'' {
 
   % chorus
   \repeat unfold 16 r1
-
-  % bridge or whatever
-
-
 }
 
 chorusVocalMelody = \relative c'' {
@@ -453,8 +453,10 @@ vocalMelody = \relative c'' {
   d!8 d cs d ~ d cs d( e ~ |
   e2.) r4 |
 
-  % pre-chorus
+  fs4. gs8 ~ gs4 a | fs4. gs8 ~ gs4 a | fs4. gs8 ~ gs4 a | fs8( e ~ e2) r8 e8 |
-  \repeat unfold 7 r1 | \time 5/4 r1 r4 |
+  fs8 fs e fs ~ fs8 e fs4 | e8 e fs4 e8 fs4 e8 | cs1 |
+
+  \time 5/4 r1 s4 |
 
   % chorus
   \time 4/4 \chorusVocalMelody
@@ -472,6 +474,8 @@ vocalMelody = \relative c'' {
   r4 ds8 e( ~ e4 fs) |
   %}
 
+  \repeat unfold 8 r1 |
+
   b4.^"Outro" cs8 ~ cs4 ds
   \repeat unfold 2 { b4. cs8 ~ cs4 ds | }
   b8( a ~ a2) r8 a |
@@ -482,10 +486,14 @@ vocalMelody = \relative c'' {
   ds ds4 e8 ~ e ds4 b8( | a2) r4 r8 fs' |
   fs fs4 fs8 ~ fs fs4 e8 ~ | e e( ds) e( ds4.) ds8 |
   e4. fs8 ~ fs a4 b8( ~ | b1 ~ |
+
   b2 ~ b8 a4 gs8 ~ | gs fs4 e8 ~ e4. ds8 |
   e4 ds8 e ~ e ds4 b8 ~ | b2) r2 |
-  \repeat unfold 4 r1 |
 
+  fs'2( ~ fs8 e4 ds8 ~ | ds e4 fs8 ~ fs2 |
+  e2. ds4 | cs1 |
+  b1) |
+  \repeat unfold 3 r1 |
 }
 
 vocals = \lyricmode {
@@ -559,7 +567,8 @@ vocals = \lyricmode {
   re -- mem -- ber you're not __ a -- lone. __
 
   % pre-chorus
-
+  Light will __ shine on ev -- en af -- ter __ we're gone. __
+  The beau -- ty of life __ re -- minds us that death is not to fear.
 
   % chorus again
   Eyes op -- en wide, __
@@ -583,6 +592,7 @@ vocals = \lyricmode {
   Pain and fear will dis -- app -- ear as your bo -- dy turns to dust. __
   Your on -- ly sin was giv -- ing in, it's time to wake up. __
 
+  Ah. __
 }