waiting for the stars tweaks

album3/waiting-for-stars.ly

@@ -150,8 +150,8 @@ guitarOne = \relative c {
 
   a2 a8 b cs4 ~ | cs1 |
   a4 e cs'8 d e4 ~ | e1 |
-  r2 d8 e f4 ~ | f2 e4 f |
-  g2 f | e g |
+  d4 a d8 e f4 ~ | f2 e4 f |
+  g2 f | e \grace fs8( g2) |
 
   % pre-chorus 2
   fs1 | R1*7 |
@@ -336,11 +336,10 @@ guitarTwo = \relative c {
     { <e bf' e> | }
   }
 
-  % pre-chorus
-  \repeat unfold 3 {
-    <fs cs' fs>8 e e <fs cs' fs> e e e <fs cs' fs> |
-    e e e <fs cs' fs> e( fs) <g d' g>\glissando( <fs cs' fs>) |
-  }
+  % pre-chorus 2
+  fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~  | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( fs) |
+  fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~  | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( fs) |
+  fs8 e g fs ~ fs e g fs ~  | fs e g fs ~ fs e g( e) |
   <fs cs' fs>4. <g d' g>8 ~ q4 <a e' b'> ~ | q2 ~ q8 <as fs' cs'>4. |
 
   \time 12/8
@@ -620,8 +619,8 @@ vocalMelody = \relative c' {
   e4 e d8 e4 f8( ~ | f4 e) r4 a, |
 
   b2 b4. b8 ~ | b2 r4 b |
-  cs cs cs cs8 cs( ~ | cs) cs4. r4 cs |
-  d d d d8 d( ~ | d) d4. r4 d |
+  cs cs cs cs8 cs ~ | cs cs4. r4 cs |
+  d d d d8 d ~ | d d4. r4 d |
   e4 e4 e8 e4. | f2( g |
 
   \bar "||"
@@ -677,7 +676,7 @@ allTheLyrics = \lyricmode {
   % verse 3
   The right -- eous words seem so in -- con -- se -- quen -- tial
   The al -- tru -- i -- stic press -- ure dis -- torts re -- al -- i -- ty. __
-  The shak -- ing hands, __ with fear -- ful trep -- i -- da -- tion,
+  The shak -- ing hands, __ with fright -- ened hes -- i -- ta -- tion,
   rise up with in -- de -- pen -- dence and leave the host in -- side. __
 
   % bridge
@@ -790,8 +789,8 @@ chordValues = \chordmode {
   b1:m | q | g:1.3.5.7+.11+ | q | e:m13 | q | a:1.2.4.5 | d2:1.3-.5.9 g2:m6/bf |
 
   % bridge
-  a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m | e:/gs |
-  a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m | e:1.3-.5-|
+  a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m7 | e:/gs |
+  a1 | q | a:/g | q | d:m/f | q | g:m7 | e:1.3-.5-|
 
   % pre-chorus 2
   fs1*6:5 | fs4.:5 g:5 a4:sus2 | q2 q8 fs4.:/as |